Character Piece #3

It took me a lot longer to write my third character piece, lots of ideas that were used and thrown away but at the end of the day, I was for the most part pleased with what I had. The time we spent discussing my piece was short due to the amount of time left in the class but there were enough comments to help me improve what I had already done. The big thing that had come up was a transition section that I had written. The peice from the beginning was building and growing until this section where it seemed to die to almost nothing but one note. The suggestions that were made to fix this were, after the build up, release the tension before the transition material. Also it was suggested that when I go back and fix the transition section that I don't leave it so light. Dr. Ross said he had some ideas for this section so I will go talk to him soon about changing this transition section.

My next step now is to start revising the material I have already written. It will be good to get back to looking at original material after taking a bit of a break from it, come at with hopefully fresh new ideas to improve what I already have.